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Surprise, It's Over

Afterlife

By bw Frampton, published Sep 05, 2008
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Surprise
It's over

Wake from the dream
that has been your days
One eye for another
One life fades away
and it is you...
it is you...
you

Surprise
It's over

Is it quite as you feared?
This sight beyond life?
You seemed content to walk
on this earth - looking near like
a demon from Hell...
Now you are...
you are...
you

Surprise
It's over

Did you ever think
that it could end
by the sins you brought unto me?
I am BellKeeper...
I knew all along...
all along
I knew
that paths of three would cross
and the paths of two
shall end in crimson -
leaving one to end in shame

Surprise
It's over

Meet me in the afterlife...
Where I have tread before

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Very good poem!! Keep up the good work! I am glad things are mending.. Look forward to more!!!

Posted on 09/08/2008 at 6:09:28 AM

 
Powerful poem very nice and deep!

Posted on 09/06/2008 at 3:09:56 AM

 
Very interesting.

Posted on 09/05/2008 at 8:09:11 PM

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