Really !
Sometimes I think,
when a real person spends maximum amount of tear ?
certainly,
on that moment he or she loses his or her dearest dear.
Sometimes I think,
what gives all people a happy and a satisfactory soul ?
obviously,
when they have already reached to their expected goal.
Sometimes I think,
what controls the actual balance system on this Earth ?
probably,
the really natural cycle of continuous death and birth.
Sometimes I think,
what gives us heart-breaking and brutal painful pain ?
if you have fever,
but a sad situation compelled you to bath under a rain.
Sometimes I think,
what makes a very stable, darling and a happy family ?
honestly,
when we have a bunch of nice reliable members really.
Sometimes I think,
what gives our works best truly well-done perfection ?
naturally,
when our works have been done by a perfect affection.
Sometimes I think,
what makes a man most successful in his private life ?
it is very easy,
when that man gets a soft-spoken and sweetheart wife.
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Tammy Taylor-Short
09/22/2009
awww this is so lovely!!
Colette-Love is the Opportunity-1984
06/01/2009
Yes! this is so true. Thanks for sharing this beautiul work of art.
andra picincu
05/29/2009
Very true and well written poem!
Angela Kaelin
05/11/2009
Beautiful, inspired verse!
Charles Odom
04/15/2009
A very good poem!
Deonils
04/14/2009
some wonderful tributes and thoughts.
Byt he way... you did well top reach Level 8 and then you stopped writing regularly. Hope u are well; come back soon. Neil
MimiRose
04/07/2009
Great poem. I enjoyed reading it. I also liked the last lines of the poem.
Artisttia
04/05/2009
What a wonderful way to define success.
stefanina hill
03/08/2009
Theres a wonderful lift at the end, very nice feel to this poem.
Dan Reveal
03/01/2009
This is great. I'm glad I found your page..
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