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Girl, Withdrawn

By Tracy Pawlukovich, published Oct 06, 2008
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My chest explodes and my soul escapes
Twisting and writhing in pain
A wanting, a needing, to recreate
The pleasure that drove me insane.

My demons are all dripping with sin
As they live now outside of me
Beating, molesting, raping my thoughts
No longer a danger to my psyche.

Soon to be destroyed they are
As their main source of food is gone
A weight is lifted and I am freed
No longer a little girl withdrawn.

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I love this piece..so empowering and vibrant ...your choice of words...intense and liberating...

Posted on 10/09/2008 at 12:10:28 PM

 
Very powerful expression of emotion here!

Posted on 10/09/2008 at 10:10:53 AM

 
INtense!

Posted on 10/07/2008 at 9:10:09 AM

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