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Halloween Contest - Scary Story: 'Ghostly Footsteps'

By Norman A. Rubin, published Oct 11, 2008
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"Memories of the past are usually quite pleasant but one bit of memory that was and still is constantly retained in my mind sent a cold finger of terror down my spine and left me in a cold sweat. About a year ago I was staying overnight at the old Bristol Hotel, an aged rather obsolete lodging centered in a large city along the Atlantic coast. There a strange incident occurred that was beyond my expectations. A ghostly figure was my companion that night through a frightening nightmare, but was it only a terrible dream or an actual happening.

"A business engagement called and I was obliged to make a stopover in that city. The choice of hotels was limited as the city played host to athletic games and hotel rooms were filled to capacity with the participants and fans to the games. Thus I was obliged to register for a room at that hostel, an ancient edifice of four stories, weather-darkened and solitary of brick and stone squeezed in every side by the overgrowing of the great city.

"But the mysteries that happened that night still haunt me. Listen to my story and you will understand....

"When I registered at reception desk I was given the key to a room on the second floor, which seemed to be the only vacant one in the entire hotel. Yet, when I walked to the dimly lit corridor to the creaky elevator I saw no one about, not a soul greeted me. When I alighted from the lift on the second floor and made my way to my room through the dimly lit corridor I heard no sounds to suggest occupancy of the rooms. It was strange as it was early in the evening when people usually prepared for their nightly entertainment or whatever engagement awaited their interests.

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A really scary story! Great!

Posted on 10/20/2008 at 7:10:01 AM

 
great story! and sufficiently spooky for the season :)

Posted on 10/16/2008 at 5:10:59 PM

 
I'm glad I read this during the day instead of at night when my house was dark.

Posted on 10/15/2008 at 12:10:14 PM

 
Very good story...I found the ending to be the creepiest part, in fact. There were a couple of spelling mistakes, but overall, you had me wrapped up in your work. Great job!

Posted on 10/15/2008 at 2:10:08 AM

 
Great story. We all hear about these horrific ghost stories, and you have to hope that they are far from true. Well-done. :)

Posted on 10/14/2008 at 12:10:00 PM

 
Rather creepy I should have read it in the morning, and not so late - I hope I won't have any nightmares tonight. Thanks Norman a good story.

Posted on 10/14/2008 at 10:10:27 AM

 
Good story that I enjoyed reading, as well as re-reading. This is a complex little tale of terror within your Halloween tale here.

Posted on 10/14/2008 at 9:10:49 AM

 
Nice one Norman, Ii will check out some more of your content when I have some time.

Posted on 10/13/2008 at 3:10:55 PM

 
Nice one Norman, Ii will check out some more of your content when I have some time.

Posted on 10/13/2008 at 3:10:18 PM

 
Those high heels were likely to have been Nancy Sinatra trying out her new boots.

Posted on 10/13/2008 at 11:10:54 AM

 
The spectre of the holocaust hangs by a chain over my door, the macabre dance of broken bodies haunted me all that winter in Stuttgart and way into the following summer. My official duty as film library technician was to pick up the films from Army Intelligence downriver at Ludwigsberg and after showing them to the patients on the psyche ward to carry them to the waiting airplane at Vaihingen so that they could continue their journey on to Nuremberg. I think I must have seen every bit of the trials and all of the evidence that was presented there.. I don't know about the people who were on the psych ward but considering the nightmares I still have those poor people must be having even worse ones. For such survivors to live in a constant war zone has got to be a journey of total terror. I remember the boys who lived next door to me as a child.. both had been smuggled out from behind the Danube Curtain...down river to Bulgaria, on to Turkey and by some hidden coincidence to Eastern O

Posted on 10/13/2008 at 11:10:50 AM

 
An excellent and chilling story. Thank you for sharing.

Posted on 10/13/2008 at 9:10:08 AM

 
I agree with comment above. I am going to save this for Halloween after the trick or treating! Thanks for being such a great story writer.

Posted on 10/13/2008 at 8:10:47 AM

 
Scary story. I sent a link of this to my friends.

Posted on 10/13/2008 at 7:10:45 AM

 
A chill runs down my spine as I read this. I so expected a childhood story so was entranced to find an adult ghost encounter.

Posted on 10/12/2008 at 5:10:17 PM

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