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Summer Dream

Reality is Seldom as Good as Fantasy

By J.E. Rosenfeld, published Jan 05, 2007
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Rating: 4.3 of 5
She could hear the whir of the oscillating fan in the back of her mind, but her dream continued. Maybe it was her burgeoning adolescent hormones, maybe it was the sweltering, sticky beach weather, or possibly it was the slight sunburn on her shoulders and chest... Whatever. Connie felt like she was on fire. Her dream seemed real. She felt awake, almost. Everything had a hazy quality to it and moved slowly as if suspended in time. She dreamed of walking to the surf shop on the corner by the beach, just casually hanging out with the pretense of shopping and scamming on some hot surf guy. She'd try on bathing suits and tiny cut-off tops until one of them took notice. Connie could picture it in her subconscious. The tanned, sandy blonde with pooka shells would cease waxing his surfboard as soon as he caught sight of her in a strapless pink and black Ocean Pacific bikini. She'd act like she wasn't interested until he insisted she go out with him that night.

He'd arrive at her grandparent's door wearing white jeans and a blue tank top, his hair combed flat and still damp at the ends from his shower. He'd have to come in and meet her parents. That was one of the many dating rules. He'd be polite and well mannered. Yes, he was a local and lived here on Brigantine Island. His family lived 3 blocks away. Yes, he was in high school, 11th grade. They would escape as soon as they could.

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Awesome short story, felt like I was on the beach and I was Connie with my first dweeb. GREAT JOB!!! Rosenfeld

Posted on 01/09/2007 at 2:01:00 PM

 
I want more - would love to see where life takes this character. Being a day dreamer myself I understand how life can never really meet those self created wishful expectations like our imagaination can! Keep it up - you're on to something here!

Posted on 01/09/2007 at 10:01:00 AM

 
Love the 80's references.....dweeb?!?!?!? Great story!

Posted on 01/08/2007 at 6:01:00 AM

 
Your descriptions were good. Keep writing.

Posted on 01/06/2007 at 8:01:00 PM

 
Whoa!!! Superb short story, this is what a true writer does, pull you into the story without you even realizing the writer is doing it. Get this Rosenfeld author to write some more.

Posted on 01/06/2007 at 5:01:00 PM

 
That story made me feel like I was there. MORE RESENFELD PLEASE

Posted on 01/06/2007 at 1:01:00 PM

 
The words formed a good story - interesting reading -- Good Job Judy! -- Best Wishes!

Posted on 01/06/2007 at 10:01:00 AM

 
Yes, more Rosenfeld PLEASE

Posted on 01/05/2007 at 7:01:00 PM

 
tRUE TO LIFE STORY

Posted on 01/05/2007 at 3:01:00 PM

 
This piece deserves more than a 3.0 out of 5.0! I thought that it was phenominal! More Rosenfeld please!

Posted on 01/05/2007 at 1:01:00 PM

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