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Betrayal by a Man

By Leslie Goff, published Jan 07, 2007
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It all happened right in front of her. The past three years meant apparently nothing to him. He was showing her his true feeling, or maybe it was just the alcohol revealing his inhibitions.

Eddie had cheated on her once already. She had let that slid because it was in the beginning of their relationship. She attempted to control him, but her efforts only pushed him away.

A man like Eddie is not one that is recommended for relationships. His life consists of: beer, sex, alcohol, and drugs. This man brings those around down to his level, with out ever blinking an eye. Not responsible and just telling women what they want to hear to get what he wanted.

She called him after he had gotten off work to see if he was coming directly home or not. Being the ragging alcoholic that he was, he told her that he was going to the bar to down a few drinks before coming home. They had an argument before he left for work that morning about how he thought that she was too much of the "Nagging girlfriend", and he told her that she needed to work on that. So instead of getting upset over the fact that he was going to stop by the bar, again, she went on to tell him that he should not be gone to long, because she was cooking dinner as they spoke. His favorite; pork chops, mashed potatoes, green beans and home made bread. This would always lead to an erotic dessert. Six hours had passed, the dinner had gotten cold, and she had gotten hot, since she had heard from Eddie; she had enough of this waiting game. Eddie had her car so she had to call her neighbor to give her a ride down to the bar, where Eddie was drinking at. This was a ride that she would soon enough find out that it would bring her to her knees, yet she did not know this at the time.

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This is as good as the last story. I can not wait to read the entire book.

Posted on 01/08/2007 at 7:01:00 PM

 
Keep on writting girl. Your Mom

Posted on 01/08/2007 at 6:01:00 PM

 
Great story :) Keep it coming!

Posted on 01/07/2007 at 11:01:00 PM

 
Great story, hope you write more

Posted on 01/07/2007 at 10:01:00 PM

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