How to Write a Movie Treatment

Have you written a screenplay or a teleplay that you hope to get read by an agent. (You probably won't get it read by a legitimate producer with access to a large enough budget to make your vision come palpably alive because most producers won't read spec scripts
 so as to avoid the potential for a lawsuit should they actually make a movie that bears a resemblance to a screenplay they rejected.) And since most agents are far too buy trying to buy back their souls from Satan, they prefer something known in the industry-and by the industry I mean, of course, the business-as a "treatment."

A treatment is a boiled-down prose version of your screenplay. Don't inject dialogue and for God's sake never suggest a camera angle or move. If your strength is dialogue, don't be ashamed to hire a professional prose ghostwriter for your treatment. You won't have to worry about sharing credit with the ghostwriter unless you accept any suggestions or changes; so don't! It is your screenplay, all a treatment doctor is doing is reshaping it from screenplay form to short story form.

The example of a treatment that I have written is based upon an unfinished screenplay which is in turn based upon an unfinished novel of mine. While I would never recommend sending in an unfinished novel manuscript, there is really not much wrong with sending in an unfinished treatment. In fact, it might even be a benefit. That way if an agent does get it to a producer, the producer can pretend that he his job has actual value by suggesting his own ending. There are several ways of writing a treatment and though it's not exactly unknown for treatments to be as long as thirty or forty pages, most are no longer than seven to ten. The shorter, the better, as long as you can get all the pertinent information in.

Treatment for Alison Wonderland

Related information
  • A treatment is a prose version of your screenplay.
  • Don't include dialogue or camera angles.
  • Most treatments are about seven pages long, though some have been well over fifty.
 
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Maybe I am an oddity or I need a lot of paperwork when I write, but I generally start with a basic outline like I learned to do in grade school, use it to write my treatment then go to spec script. I will also tweak the Treatment as I write the script because details come to me as I write. I also write character bios. I do not know if anyone else does this, but it helps me as I write to get into each character's head, and make sure that their reactions to situations stays consistent.

Posted on 06/14/2009 at 8:06:31 AM

I agree with Mark. A treatment is primarily a tool to help the writer know what his story is about, and to help him give the story structure. It's harder to go from writing on a blank sheet when trying to write the script when you know what the story is about, but you don't really "know" what the story is about. Treatments usually sell after a screenwriter has sold a screenplay, or a screenwriter has enter a contract with a studio and they need a quick turn around on an idea before the script is developed. I had the same questions a while back, but Syd Field's Screenwriters books helped answer a lot of questions for me.

Posted on 04/21/2009 at 8:04:08 AM

I was wondering why so many different variations on how many pages a treatment should be? I've heard everything from 1-12. Please help!

Posted on 03/26/2009 at 3:03:54 PM

thats right. Tony Bill explains that in his book movie speak. just write it and send it in. think outside the box. cross the line. call up agents, enter contests.

Posted on 02/22/2009 at 6:02:03 PM

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Posted on 09/25/2007 at 11:09:00 PM

This is what I get for typing on the internet at 2 am. I come off sounding like a crank! Sorry. Your article, as it pertains to writing treatments is excellent. I would just caution against encouraging people to use them as a way into Hollywood. But you're right, there aren't a lot of hard and fast rules to working in the film industry. It's what makes this place exciting.

Posted on 03/25/2007 at 11:03:00 AM

Mark: Thanks for offering up an alternative perspective. I didn't question your qualifications for my own benefit, but for those who might read this article and become confused. My statements are based on the experiences of a produced screenwriter and I think your experience proves that in Hollywood there are no hard and fast rules.

Posted on 03/25/2007 at 6:03:00 AM

..not two or three years. I think it's silly to ask for my qualifications, but it seems important to you. I'm a professional screenwriter with numerous completed scripts and partnerships with several producers. I've recently written and directed an indie short. Last year I was a staff writer on a TV show called "Rules of Deception" in which I wrote 8 epsiodes. I've been slated to write and direct an indie feature for either the fall or next spring (depending on completion of the script). I'm a member of the WGAw. I go to WGA meetings. I attend WGA screenings. I go bowling with and attend BBQs in the backyards of working Hollywood screenwriters. In short, I'm "inside baseball". Just last year, for example, I was sipping beers with James Vanderbilt, the writer of one of the movies you reviewed recently (Zodiac). We didn't talk Hollywood or writing or movies. We talked kids. His wife was pregnant and mine just had our second. Hope that's good enough. ;^D

Posted on 03/25/2007 at 1:03:00 AM

Producers won't read unsolicited spec scripts, but they won't read unsolicited treatments either. If you have a lit agent, then yeah, maybe he can help peddle a treatment, but he will probably say, "Why don't you just write the script instead?" Your premise that producers prefer treatments to specs due to litigation issues is simply false. Why? Because an author can register a treatment with the WGA just as easily as he can a whole screenplay. So if a movie gets made that is eerily similar to a treatment pitched at a production company, the company can still get sued. But the thing is, a company which has played fair and has not stolen anything -- be it a treatment or spec -- has little to worry about by way of litigation because such cases are nearly unwinnable by the plantiff. So, with treatments being equal to specs as grounds for litigation, why do producers prefer a whole spec to a treatment? Because they want to be in pre-production in two or three months, not two or three yea

Posted on 03/25/2007 at 1:03:00 AM

Mark, if you could provide us with a little background information as to your qualifications to make such a absolute statement, it would be appreciated. Considering the tremendous number of books and web sites dedicated to screenwriting that includes substantial sections on writing a treatment, I have no choice but to question your assertion. And I happen to know for fact from a produced screenwriter that legitimate producers will not read spec scripts sent in by mail.

Posted on 03/23/2007 at 4:03:00 AM

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