My Freedom Dream
SANIBELI dreamed of a place where sinners were free,
where believers resembled the dead.
I dreamed of a time when all Gods were entombed
and we believed in each other instead.
I dreamed of a place beyond their dark star,
beside the Sanibel Sea,
where believers and all their Gods were entombed,
where my brothers and I walked free.
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Paul Rance
02/04/2010
A nice twist on the Heaven belief structure. These lines are fantastic: "I dreamed of a time when all Gods/ were entombed/and we believed in each other instead."
John Myers
09/07/2009
Great piece!
Walton S. Tissot
06/27/2009
:)
Heather Carreiro
05/01/2009
Interesting imagery.
Veronica Davidson
05/25/2008
Happy Memorial Day! It's all about the freedom. Thanks.
Teresa Mahieu
04/18/2008
Wow, how did I not find this one before. Such a lush green I seen with your minds eye!!
Cassandra Mae
03/08/2008
I'm dreaming!!!! Keep on writing!
eiffelvu
02/07/2008
and to think that was your first published piece...terrific
Monique Finley
01/28/2008
I maintain, i really want to go here!
Jeff Musall
01/21/2008
Simple, and great...
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