The Judges Chronicles: Rebirth of Shavron (first Chapter Preview)

(What you are reading is a first draft of the final proof, any grammatical or spelling errors have been changed. Also, the format is different as well, but the stroy is the same.) Enjoy!!

Introduction: How it all Began

When time began a world was created; formed from the very fingertips of God. Life was given to the creations He made and they lived among each other. God loved his creations and he called it good: for all he made was good and there was no evil among them. However, there was one creature that hated the very essence of his Creator and everything that he made. This creature sought to bring evil into the world. Thinking that it was out of God's watchful eye, this creature tempted the others in the world. Slowly, all kinds of evil began to brew in their minds. At that moment that world was changed and it would never be the same again. This is a tale of a world quite different from ours, but also the same in some ways. It's a tale of good and evil, a tale of faith in, and a tale of the redemption of that fallen world.

In the far regions, past the high mountains and beyond the Cinnamount Woods (a place where all the trees' barks smelled of cinnamon), there is a small land called Shavron. It's a special land abundant with riches beyond any creature's desire. Because of this, Shavron's past was filled with chaos and turmoil between its citizens and other nations. Jealousy rose and wars, famine, enslavement, and plundering soon followed. Bloodshed stained the ground leaving Shavron a desolate wasteland. However, within the chaos there was a small group of creatures that sought guidance from a higher means. For years they prayed without ceasing, crying out to their Creator for help. Sometimes their prayers could be heard for hours into the night. Some didn't understand the actions of the few: Why would they pray at such a time? Fighting wars seemed more sensible than praying for a miracle, but the few continued to pray, never giving up.