Useless Phrases that Killed Your Writing's Impact

Avoid These to Give Your Writing More Punch

By theBarefoot, published Apr 19, 2007
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Crowding your article with worthless phrases is poor writing. It detracts from the impact you want your words to carry. Good writing conveys authority. The examples that follow are shear padding. They burden your reader with unnecessary words, waste their time, and leave them feeling unfulfilled. Give your articles power by avoiding these useless phrases.

You get the point
This is an affirmation to the author not the reader. The real meaning is, "I don't think I made my point so I'll pretend that if the reader didn't get it, they are dumb. Then I won't be questioned." If you have resorted to this phrase, it is a signal that you should give serious attention to what preceded it.

Be Creative
For people like me who have not a single, creative bone in their body, seeing "Be creative" in the middle of a how-to article blows me out of the water. If I were creative, I wouldn't be reading your article. This is like the old cartoon of the math equation where one of the steps is "then a miricle happens." Give the reader the facts. At least give them a few ideas.

Here's the punch line
Phrases such as "Get it?" just kill a joke. Telegraphing the joke in an article abstract will stop most viewers before they even click to read. If you ever used "This is a comical look at" or "A humorous view of," you've fallen prey. If you have to tell the reader it's funny, it's not.

As a matter of fact
This is phrased better as "In fact" or simply "Factually." Sometimes it is better not to write as we speak. This is one of those times. By definition, facts stand on their own. They should be presented as statements without cursory language. Here are a few other members of this phrase family.

"On the grounds that." You are not a lawyer. This is not a trail. Use "because."
"In light of the fact that." This is matter-of-fact's second cousin once removed and should be.
"After all is said and done." Just complete the thought without the fluff.
"In conclusion." We can see that the article is ending. There is no need to telegraph your final paragraph. Wrap it up.

Useless Phrases that Killed Your Writing's Impact

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Takeaways
  • Phrases like these are padding and a crutch.
  • Give you writing more impact through elimination.
  • Reduce clutter. Simplify your writing.
Did You Know?
Some species of herring have been known to hold a roll of wrapped quarters in their fins.
Resources
  • Note: The author has embedded no links in the body of this article.
  • theBarefoot at Wordpress
  • Kim Blank's Wordiness
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Let me qualify: If you are saying "a myriad of reasons." it should just be 'myriad reasons." No "of" at the end.

Posted on 06/30/2008 at 10:06:12 PM

 
You left out my pet peeve - "a myriad of [pick a noun] ...." Myriad means tens of thousands, so they are saying "a tens of thousads of ...." It should be just be plan "myriad." Just thought I put my two cents in here.

Posted on 06/30/2008 at 10:06:49 PM

 
Excellent article and great advise. I need all the help I can get on making my writing better. :)

Posted on 06/24/2008 at 9:06:50 PM

 
Yeah well I thought it was funny! I did read this earlier and it is a great article with great suggestions. I am wordy and I will work on it. Thanks for the article and comment,.

Posted on 05/28/2008 at 8:05:47 PM

 
What a great way to use all the useless phrases--to justify your point--and get praised for doing so. LOL! Brilliant article. But then so are all the articles that I've read of yours. You're so damned smart!

Posted on 05/22/2008 at 2:05:46 PM

 
Good article, Randy.

Posted on 04/07/2008 at 12:04:48 AM

 
Another good article from The Barefoot! Thanks for the warning...I don't *think* I'm prone to these, but now I'll make sure to watch for them!

Posted on 04/04/2008 at 12:04:13 PM

 
Do opinion articles have to follow all those rules, too? I mean, asking your readers "Do you see what I mean yet?" is still a bad thing, right?

Posted on 03/24/2008 at 11:03:39 PM

 
I am laughing out loud now. I felt the need to tell you that because you wouldn't know it otherwise. This was a great read, and I am guilty of some of the things you wrote. I will bookmark this article and refer to it when I write my next technical piece. Thanks a bunch!

Posted on 03/24/2008 at 11:03:31 PM

 
This is a great piece. Every writer speaker should make note of this. Dear barefoot i quiet often use some of these, This is an eyeopener to me. Thanks for sharing this valuable tips. God bless. annp

Posted on 03/24/2008 at 3:03:38 AM

 
Great article. I definitely get the point!! ( o :

Posted on 03/17/2008 at 2:03:15 PM

 
As a matter of fact I am actually guilty as hell using fluff. Sorry and apologize.

Posted on 03/10/2008 at 11:03:47 PM

 
only if your planned perfection is planned parenthood, greg. :D barefoot, is there anything you cant do?

Posted on 03/06/2008 at 1:03:45 PM

 
LMAO AT THIS ! SAY YOU DON'T MEAN IT....Loved it ,very entertaining!...Diana

Posted on 03/06/2008 at 12:03:30 AM

 
But wait...wouldn't advanced planning be a necessary prerequisite if you intend to reach your final destination with the utmost perfection?

Posted on 03/02/2008 at 11:03:28 PM

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