Encounter with a Playful Spirit Just South of Keetmanshoop

By Vapour in Africa, published Apr 24, 2007
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Ten kilometres south of Keetmanshoop, just North East of the one hundred and sixty five kilometres that make up the Fish River Canyon, the second largest canyon in the world, it is deathly quiet in the evening in this the second most unpopulated country in the world, so quiet that one starts to hear things. Is it that our minds create noises just to ensure we are not dead. That it has to ensure that systems of working neurons are transmitting, impulses pulsing. It plays tricks and just when you have done with your relaxed deep breathing techniques, it'll twitch your left eyelid and mock you with an inner voice, "Ah twitched your eye, he, he", or right before you are moving from body to mind to soul it'll scream out laughing, "the end of your nose is itchy". So immature, so childlike this human, didn't it realise that a soul has deep thoughts and meanings to contemplate, that life was not just a game.

Lying on my back on this moon like rocky ground with its almost absent flora, looking at the milky lane, which in this part of the world is so dense, so close that it appears like a stratus cloud form almost touchable, just 4.6 billion years brighter.

I pick out Jupiter, why do I pick out Jupiter, because it's graphically the coolest planet, all those rings surrounding it, the marvel comic planet. I concentrate on it and eventually my mind assists and blocks everything else out and I am transported to within meters of this massive planet, so close I can hear as it spins in deep space.

Encounter with a Playful Spirit Just South of Keetmanshoop

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Hey Deez glad it caught your fancy

Posted on 06/09/2007 at 3:06:00 PM

 
Thanks Alyce and yes it was written to express the funny side. I think it is important that we are able to laugh at ourselves, specifically at times when we feel we need to really serious, don't you?

Posted on 05/08/2007 at 2:05:00 AM

 
If you have not published any books you better do so soon! I do not know if you wrote this one to be funny, but you sure tickled my funny bone.

Posted on 05/08/2007 at 12:05:00 AM

 
Thanks for the comments and advice Laurel1nd, as always constructive criticism is appreciated.

Posted on 05/04/2007 at 3:05:00 PM

 
Fascinating stuff. Use more question marks! (?) Spiritual reading matter always appeals to me.

Posted on 05/03/2007 at 11:05:00 AM

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