Past, Present and Future

By Gyani, published May 11, 2007
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A puddle of water I beheld;
But an ocean to an ant,
A few drops to an elephant.

Strangely colorless and pure
As freshly fallen rain
Or newly formed dew.

Imagining time to be a long line
With no beginning and no end,
I started searching
For a point to mark the present.

And what shall the point represent,
But the puddle of water I beheld?

Then I started waiting
For the Past and the Future.

As the Sun rose
And the chilliness went,
The puddle started shrinking
And I began recording the changes.

The full puddle became the past,
The shrunk puddle the present.
The future I thought, would be
Just a depression on the ground.

As I lay shuddering at this prospect,
The puddle disappeared as I'd thought.

The Sun fell and the Moon came.
Tears welled up in my eyes.

Mourning the death of the puddle,
I slowly fell asleep.

Later, when chirping birds heralded
The coming morn, I woke up.

I gave one final look at the puddle
And, Holy stars! What did I see?

The future had become the past
And the past was now the present.

The puddle was full again,
And so shall it be with everything else!

Past, Present and Future

A puddle of water I beheld; but an ocean to an ant, a few drops to an elephant. Strangely colorless and pure as freshly fallen rain or newly formed dew.

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I liked it with "chilliness". Great analogy.

Posted on 06/05/2007 at 6:06:00 PM

 
History does tend to repeat itself, in the sense of exhibiting numerous recurring themes and phenomena of a given kind. I liked your use of the puddle as a metaphor for the cyclical view of time.

Posted on 06/03/2007 at 11:06:00 PM

 
ooops! I meant 'chillness' there! Thanks for pointing out the error!

Posted on 05/16/2007 at 12:05:00 AM

 
Hmm... Philosophical. As the Sun rose And the chilliness went... Was it deliberate, or did u mean chillness?

Posted on 05/16/2007 at 12:05:00 AM

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