Simple Writing Mistakes that Can Cost You Readers

By Erin Snap, published May 21, 2007
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Everyone has a typo slip through into a published article now and then. The people who approve the articles are called "content managers," not "content editors." But some errors go beyond mere mistakes and into the realm of willful ignorance. If you're not getting the page views you'd like, maybe you are turning off potential readers with the following issues.

Writing the body of your article as one continuous paragraph
Cohesive ideas should be grouped into a paragraph which has an end, then a line should be skipped, then another group of similar sentences should be grouped. It is difficult if not impossible to read an entire page that is made up of a huge paragraph. All the words seem to run together.

Comma splices
Two independent clauses cannot be joined together by one overworked comma. Here is a comma splice. "It doesn't matter how well written my article is, I can trick people into clicking on it with a provocative headline."

One correct way to join two independent clauses would be with a semicolon. "I have the soul of a writer; I don't need the mind of an English teacher."

Another way is to make the two independent clauses into two separate sentences. "I clicked on your article. I wish I had not given you the page view."

Yet a third way to avoid a comma splice could be to use a connecting word. "I will not be reading any more of Erin's work because it's negative."

The wrong way, again, is to write, "I don't need a dictionary, the meaning behind my article is more important than my spelling."

More comma misuse
A list should be separated by commas, including a comma before "and" or "or." The right way to list is to write, "I went to the store for bread, milk, and ammunition." Do not write, "I like to read Swift Pope and fan fiction."

Misuse of common words
"Of" and "off" are not interchangeable and they never will be. Neither are "your" and "you're." If you don't know the difference between "there," "they're," and "their," you need to repeat elementary school.

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I was taught that a comma before a conjunction was optional. Sometimes I use them and sometimes I don't. This is great info that I'll certainly put into practice.

Posted on 04/04/2008 at 8:04:45 PM

 
These are all great points that we all need to be aware of. Thanks, Erin! Sophie

Posted on 08/22/2007 at 10:08:00 AM

 
YES! YES! YES!

Posted on 08/15/2007 at 10:08:00 AM

 
Great points! Thanks for an interesting article. :-)

Posted on 07/02/2007 at 9:07:00 PM

 
"one continuous paragraph" is the worst!

Posted on 06/17/2007 at 6:06:00 PM

 
great advice. thanks for the reminders. I'll keep them in mind when I write my next article.

Posted on 06/10/2007 at 2:06:00 PM

 
LOL! Great article.

Posted on 06/09/2007 at 6:06:00 PM

 
Great writing tips Erin.

Posted on 06/06/2007 at 2:06:00 AM

 
Good grammatical tips! I've always wanted to include the comma before the conjunction because I think it just makes more since, but I saw those rules in college that said you're not supposed to. Ah! That's why I think grammar is TOO picky and should be relaxed on many areas like that. But these are still good tips.

Posted on 06/02/2007 at 8:06:00 AM

 
If only the people who have forgotten the difference between "there", "they're" and "their" would repeat elementary school! There is so much more they'd learn.

Posted on 05/28/2007 at 2:05:00 PM

 
not bad but definitely not the most horrific writing mistakes people make on a regular basis.

Posted on 05/28/2007 at 2:05:00 PM

 
Excellent article!

Posted on 05/25/2007 at 1:05:00 PM

 
Great read! Thank you for the tips!!!

Posted on 05/22/2007 at 2:05:00 PM

 
Another great article (hope you didn't get inspired to write this after reading my articles... lol)!

Posted on 05/21/2007 at 2:05:00 PM

 
I've always heard the comma before the conjunction is optional and a matter of style. I tend to not use it, but I would suggest when in doubt, use it! The rest of your tips I agree with completely. Nice job!

Posted on 05/21/2007 at 1:05:00 PM

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