Love in the Gaslight

By Jeanne Sparks-Carreker, published Aug 05, 2007
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There's something there that is not there-
A subtle ripple somewhere underneath.
There was not there when I was there, so
There couldn't be there now that it's just me.

No one said that, you just thought you heard
What you did not know.
If we'd said that, I'd have heard it,
And you know I'd be the first to tell you so.

There's no other now, who wasn't then,
Which is to say there is not;
It's that bothersome search for mythical clues
That creates the very problem you wish to stop.

You need some help, some kind of doctor, just
To show you that it's all been in your head.
"Mother, May I," she asked him then, "just who
Do you want me to try to be instead?"

Oh, Pretty Dear, see here, see here! Those wishes,
You will remember, we decided to toss?
You gave them up anyway, took part in this play,
Then ask me what I did with what you willingly lost?

Until you stop all the asking about
Something more you may need to be knowing,
I will decide what is best for your mind to be fed.
By creating this wall, you ruin what we are at all,
And you never even wait for me to say
"Simon Says."

prisoner of the mind

Credit: jsc

Copyright: jsc

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Thank you, Genie! It really was something way before its time, but not, either. Haha, sounds like gaslighting (grin). Have a great 2008!

Posted on 01/01/2008 at 12:01:14 PM

 
Gaslight was one of my favorite movies when I was a kid. Great job on the poem.

Posted on 12/24/2007 at 11:12:26 AM

 
That is one fancy poem you got there.

Posted on 08/11/2007 at 3:08:00 PM

 
Awe, Sundance, I'm so sorry that it does.... Unless you're pulling my leg again. Read the article I submitted a while back on "Gaslighting." Women emotionally abuse also, McGee, and you don't have to keep taking it. You can come stay with me in Bama if you want!!! I'll pull out the sleeper sofa and we'll wear fuzzy houseshoes and make fun of the "How to Change a Lightbulb" articles!!! It'd be a blast :( Hang in there, Sundance! -Cassidy

Posted on 08/07/2007 at 9:08:00 PM

 
Wow Cass, this really hits home right now! Sundance

Posted on 08/07/2007 at 7:08:00 PM

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