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Your Own Place

By ac, published Aug 17, 2007
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Some poison, a gun, or a slash on the wrist

Will you end it all just because you are pissed

The life that you've lead has not been very pleasant

But you only have lived up to the present

The future is what you have ahead

If you end it now than you are just dead

Your life will be over, no happiness there

Just because you determined that life isn't fair

Guess what, you are human, and we all feel hurt

But only the cowards end up in the dirt

The rest of us create our own joy in this life

We don't run away at the end of a knife

We take the reins of the life that we lead

And through that control we are all freed

If your life feels to heavy for your shoulders to hold

Then you need to be strong and you need to be bold

For when you decide the direction you'll go

Then your reasons for death melt just like snow

You will go boldly forward on your own path

And the rest of the world will know all your wrath

Anger and hatred is not the way through

Confidence and peace is all that will do

You have control if you look close enough

It is time for you to call your life's bluff

Death will back down when stared in the face

And on this earth you will find your own place

Your Own Place

Bleak and lost in this thing we call life?

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super freak super freak youre super freaky

Posted on 11/24/2007 at 10:11:00 AM

 
Lmao... This poem has nothing to do with you honey. I promise.

Posted on 08/20/2007 at 11:08:00 AM

 
I think you wrote this about thirty minutes after I told you I was going to jump off the balcony to end it all... :))

Posted on 08/20/2007 at 11:08:00 AM

 
Great message, its wonderful that you wrote this obviously in order to maybe help someone...the intent behind the words is great an amazing gift!

Posted on 08/17/2007 at 2:08:00 PM

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