Suburban Monday

A Haiku

By Becky G., published Sep 17, 2007
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Trash cans stand neatly
Lining streets
Suburban Monday

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Great haiku...really does say alot. :-)

Posted on 12/11/2007 at 9:12:04 PM

 
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Posted on 11/13/2007 at 12:11:00 PM

 
So true.

Posted on 09/21/2007 at 7:09:00 PM

 
Great! Sophie

Posted on 09/20/2007 at 3:09:00 PM

 
Great haiku!

Posted on 09/20/2007 at 7:09:00 AM

 
It's Monday like that for my neighborhood!

Posted on 09/19/2007 at 6:09:00 PM

 
the title and last line flow beautifully and poetically off the tongue. love it.

Posted on 09/19/2007 at 12:09:00 PM

 
Very good. I can't write Haikus to save my life

Posted on 09/18/2007 at 7:09:00 PM

 
:)

Posted on 09/18/2007 at 7:09:00 AM

 
Loved your haiku.

Posted on 09/17/2007 at 7:09:00 PM

 
LOL, that was great.

Posted on 09/17/2007 at 6:09:00 PM

 
very clever. i liked it

Posted on 09/17/2007 at 2:09:00 PM

 
Great commentary on american suburban life.Cleverly written.

Posted on 09/17/2007 at 11:09:00 AM

 
Excellent! Sounds like my block this morning. :-)

Posted on 09/17/2007 at 10:09:00 AM

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