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Praying for Blackness

By Layla Lair, published Sep 30, 2007
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Praying for Blackness

Bleak and tormented my mournful eyes bleed
Praying for blackness

A shroud of cover to define my night
Where sorrow is only a memory

And my hearts desire, is an unlit moment away
For behind my opaque eyes lies the gateway

Where I am wrapped in a circle of mist
To reap safe comfort, soundlessly consuming

Gently, tears echo as I struggle with the abyss
Whispering gray clouds surround me

Engulfing the sadness of cascading tears
They unleash me from this sorrow filled day

To accept sleeps elusive embrace
Where all will be forgotten

All but the dreams, I choose to dream
And tomorrows promise that I cannot yet face

Praying for Blackness

Praying for Blackness

Credit: Penny Mathews

Copyright: Penny Mathews

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I admire your poetry very much-you have quite a knack for it. Well done!

Posted on 03/14/2008 at 10:03:06 PM

 
A strong poem. Beautifully written.

Posted on 03/05/2008 at 3:03:43 PM

 
Wow, very powerful words and images. . . thanks!

Posted on 03/04/2008 at 3:03:45 PM

 
So very poignant and expressive. Great work!

Posted on 03/03/2008 at 8:03:03 PM

 
You have a phenomenal gift with words. Thank you for sharing them here.

Posted on 03/03/2008 at 2:03:02 PM

 
Well done! The picture really does go right along with it. Sorry about your mom.

Posted on 03/03/2008 at 2:03:55 PM

 
Another great one. I hope you are trying to sell these. You are really good.

Posted on 02/15/2008 at 12:02:10 PM

 
Wow, very powerful. Nicely done.

Posted on 11/11/2007 at 11:11:00 AM

 
Very thoughtful and strong

Posted on 11/05/2007 at 9:11:00 PM

 
This is really poignant. Well done.

Posted on 11/02/2007 at 3:11:00 PM

 
Sorry to hear about your mom.

Posted on 11/02/2007 at 2:11:00 AM

 
You been hittin' the bottle sista?? Love Ya

Posted on 11/01/2007 at 7:11:00 PM

 
well done.

Posted on 10/31/2007 at 8:10:00 PM

 
Very thought provoking. Thanks for sharing.

Posted on 10/17/2007 at 4:10:00 PM

 
wicked piece...:-)

Posted on 10/07/2007 at 1:10:00 PM

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