The Raggy Man

Part One-

By M.S.Medina, published Oct 09, 2007
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It began when Juan noticed the bum under the bridge for the second time that week. Juan noticed the way the old man's spindly legs wobbled as he lurched from one edge of the dry creek bed to the other and the way he used an frayed extension cord to hold up his stained, dirty pants. Juan hated old people period. He hated the way they looked, smelled and well, just the fact that they existed in the world, made him hate them all the more. The bum stumbled and slipped to the ground like an empty sack, the kind that held the beans and rice that his mother brought home to make their meager family meals. There had not been much on the table since Juan's father had gone off to fight in some country far away in a war that Juan could never begin to understand.

Juan frowned and squinted his eyes in the hot Los Angeles sun and he wiped the sweat that trickled down the edges of his face from his brown forehead. He guessed he hated those rice and beans, almost as much as he hated his father who had disappeared from his life and homeless, old men. He nudged the greasy haired young boy that stood near him. He wordlessly pointed in the direction of where the old man lay limply on the dusty parched ground. Juan lifted his eyebrow as if asking a question of the boy who had a permanent look of knowing something secret and not so nice on his face. In unison they both turned and headed down the embankment towards where the man who resembled a fallen scarecrow lay. The old man lay motionless, almost as if he were awaiting whatever fate might descend upon him.

The Raggy Man

It started when Juan noticed the bum under the bridge for the second time that week.

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Actually I do know some people with names like Juan who would say "damn dirty bugger". And worse of course. In both English and Spanish.

Posted on 11/04/2007 at 6:11:00 PM

 
Hmmmm... Let's see where this is headed. On to part 2.

Posted on 10/27/2007 at 8:10:00 AM

 
You have me hooked. I have to read part two.

Posted on 10/22/2007 at 10:10:00 PM

 
Hey Donald, what can I say? I just wanted to see if you were awake, lol. I know some Spanish exclamations but it didn't seem appropriate, lol.

Posted on 10/15/2007 at 10:10:00 PM

 
Excellent! I am headed to read part two.

Posted on 10/15/2007 at 7:10:00 AM

 
Wow, I really enjoyed this one.

Posted on 10/14/2007 at 3:10:00 PM

 
*****

Posted on 10/13/2007 at 1:10:00 PM

 
Very enjoyable. I've never met any kid named Juan who would ever say "Damn dirty bugger." LOL! It flows nicely!

Posted on 10/12/2007 at 10:10:00 AM

 
terrific...:)

Posted on 10/11/2007 at 3:10:00 PM

 
Another perfect article!

Posted on 10/10/2007 at 2:10:00 PM

 
you have got a winner with this one..

Posted on 10/10/2007 at 12:10:00 PM

 
another winner

Posted on 10/10/2007 at 11:10:00 AM

 
This is beginning to sound like a sad but true event that many young people have been and are now experiencing.

Posted on 10/09/2007 at 11:10:00 PM

 
I just wanted to let any of you who read this article know that if you hadn't noticed this article is in two parts. AC didn't include that on the title. This is part one. :}

Posted on 10/09/2007 at 8:10:00 PM

 
Another great one!

Posted on 10/09/2007 at 6:10:00 PM

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