Ordinary

By Nicholas Smoke, published Nov 09, 2007
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When the leaves begin to fall,
The things we know,
Are really small,
So let's just go,
To the waterfall,
Wash our mind,
And try to find,
The righteous kind,
The time is now,
Said the big brown cow,
Discover the keep,
Out of the heap,
Free the sheep,
So they can play,
And love the day,
In every way,
What about life,
Why all this strife,
Give up the fight,
Let's do it right,
Taking delight,
In the ordinary.

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verrrry good! I love the part about the brown cow!!! That really got me hooked and to appreciate the little things in our lives!!!! Okay, I admit it, I'm a fan!!!! great job here!

Posted on 12/22/2007 at 12:12:46 PM

 
Very nice!

Posted on 11/19/2007 at 7:11:00 AM

 
nicely done

Posted on 11/17/2007 at 8:11:00 AM

 
Love your writing as well, I love how you allow it to rhyme but not to much...;)

Posted on 11/09/2007 at 5:11:00 PM

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