The Revelation of an Atheist : a Haiku

Death breathes heavy
No one is watching -
Is that You that I see?


 
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There are plenty of atheists in foxholes. To say otherwise is demeaning and offensive. Have come very close to death (by attempted murder) myself I didn't become a believer or cry out for God because I figured I was dying. If you don't think something is real, fear of imminent death isn't going to force you to. It's offensive to say people are cowardly enough to believe any sweet story just because they are dying.

Posted on 03/18/2008 at 2:03:55 AM

Wow, very deep for a haiku!

Posted on 02/29/2008 at 2:02:08 PM

Chilling. Hard to say so much with so few words.

Posted on 02/28/2008 at 8:02:59 AM

This is chilling!!!! The picture was great!!!! *****

Posted on 01/28/2008 at 12:01:59 PM

Wow,so deep..! And you conveyed the message only within three lines! Great poem, I love it! :-)

Posted on 01/25/2008 at 10:01:18 AM

Simple, yet deep and thought provoking. Nicely done, Kim. :-)

Posted on 01/11/2008 at 6:01:39 PM

Chillingly good!

Posted on 01/07/2008 at 11:01:21 AM

Wow. Yeah, profound. Thats the word. What you captured here was raw, unadulterated truth. Nice.

Posted on 12/20/2007 at 7:12:21 PM

Short but profound. Thanks!

Posted on 12/17/2007 at 11:12:55 AM

Very nice work! P.S. You can write your Haiku however you want, because, it's your work and your AC page. :-)

Posted on 12/14/2007 at 1:12:20 PM

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