Black: A Poem

By Purple Teddy Bear, published Nov 26, 2007
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When you left me
I felt my world
Crush and crumble
Before my very eyes
My heart has broken
Into a million pieces
My life is so worthless
My world is black
Now I see life
In black, white, and shade of gray
No colors, no beauty, no light
Just black, and complete darkness
In time this heart will heal
And then my world
Will once again be
beautiful, colorful, and full of life
But until then
All that I see is black

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I can't believe I missed this one before..good job :)

Posted on 04/24/2008 at 6:04:53 PM

 
Good poem.

Posted on 03/09/2008 at 6:03:58 PM

 
Very touching!

Posted on 01/13/2008 at 3:01:15 PM

 
well written,nice job!!!!

Posted on 11/28/2007 at 2:11:00 PM

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