Being a Lover of a Beautiful Mind You Must Proceed

Some of My Heartfelt Thoughts

By SAIKAT KUMAR DUTTA, published Nov 18, 2007
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Being a careful mother,
To play with her little child,
It is nothing artificial,
But it is common to domestic and wild.

Being a respective teacher
To bless his dear students,
It is nothing false,
But it increases their happiness and confidence.

Being a lover of a beauty,
Proceeding near her to propose,
It is nothing amazing,
But nobody should try him to oppose.

Being a repentant mind,
To pray for an apology,
It is nothing unexpected,
But it is a sign of his innocent psychology.

Being a true reader,
Passing comments to favourite authour,
It is nothing surprising,
But it is helpful to make a skillful writer.

Being a responsible son,
To obey his parents thought,
It is nothing extraordinary,
But it brings the blessings of God.

Being a careful father,
Looking always after his baby,
It is nothing uncommon,
But it makes the fate of child stronger and heavy.

Being a young man,
To think about a nice young lady,
It is nothing unnatural,
But it really looks quite smart and steady.





















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always a total masterpiece!

Posted on 12/12/2007 at 12:12:58 PM

 
This is beautiful. I love how you express tenderness. Great poem.

Posted on 12/04/2007 at 12:12:00 PM

 
another beautiful poem!

Posted on 11/30/2007 at 1:11:00 AM

 
Wow..this is beautful! Keep them coming.

Posted on 11/24/2007 at 12:11:00 PM

 
Very emotional and that is the way poetry should be. It is the painting your heart creates. Simply beautiful...

Posted on 11/21/2007 at 12:11:00 PM

 
Another nice poem. :-)

Posted on 11/20/2007 at 8:11:00 PM

 
I agree with all your fans: Beautifully said! Well done. "Being a careful father, Looking always after his baby, It is nothing uncommon, But it makes the fate of child stronger and heavy": This America is especially in want of.

Posted on 11/19/2007 at 10:11:00 AM

 
Beautiful.

Posted on 11/19/2007 at 6:11:00 AM

 
Well done

Posted on 11/19/2007 at 6:11:00 AM

 
Oh, how wonderful that is!!..and just before Thanksgiving to read it..thanks for the inspiration!

Posted on 11/19/2007 at 4:11:00 AM

 
wonderful!!!!!!

Posted on 11/18/2007 at 10:11:00 PM

 
Another wonderful piece.

Posted on 11/18/2007 at 5:11:00 PM

 
Very nice. I liked!

Posted on 11/18/2007 at 4:11:00 PM

 
I really enjoyed reading this!

Posted on 11/18/2007 at 3:11:00 PM

 
:D

Posted on 11/18/2007 at 12:11:00 PM

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