As You Create

A Poem from My Helium.com Archive

By Gone With The Wind, published Nov 29, 2007
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AS YOU CREATE:
Off in the distance...
Like a blazing chariot...
I am your fury.

The peace inside me(isn't much)..
When I know my fate.
Space is like...
A vacuum.
As you create,
I am born...
Born a slave...
to the horror.

Will I ever wake from this nightmare?
I am not a Godly beast...
I am a sluggard...
A ghost...a zombie.

While you thought it out...
I lost hope...walking on aimlessly.
Yes, I know my fate...to never die.
A bad vision...
you lock me inside...
to be repulsed...
To be feared

Off in the distance...
Like a blazing chariot...
I am your fury.

Space is like...
A vacuume.
As you create,I am born...
Born a slave.

Tossed in the storm ...

Like a ship going down...

Ablaze in the night.
I am a fury...

As you create.
I am a dream...
A bad dream.

Full of life...
Full of anger...
Full of promise.

I am in your head.

You imagine me.
I scare you

I am an unforgetable gory dream...
I am a fury...
I am created....
As you create.

I am what you want...
What you made of me...
So you can be...
Afraid.



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Interesting. thank You fer sharin'. Merry Christmas. ;-}}>

Posted on 12/06/2007 at 6:12:00 PM

 
Reminds me of Sergeant Dan giving God a piece of his mind on Forest Gump; very cool poem!

Posted on 12/01/2007 at 1:12:00 AM

 
Excellent job!

Posted on 11/30/2007 at 4:11:00 PM

 
Awesome poem! I will not try to interpret it, but I know what it means to me.

Posted on 11/29/2007 at 11:11:00 PM

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