First Love

A Poem

By Viktorya Hale, published Dec 01, 2007
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Rating: 4.8 of 5
I don't wanna show anymore emotion
Numb
I don't wanna feel anything
Hard
I don't wanna laugh anymore
Cold
I don't wanna cry anymore
Bitter
I don't wanna sing anymore
Hurt
I don't wanna love anymore
Hate
I don't wanna be free
Pride
I don't wanna be what I am because it's not me
Help
I don't wanna feel this way
Surrender
Yes let go of it all.
Peace
I have found my first Love, again.

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Thanks to all of my new and faithful readers :)

Posted on 12/04/2007 at 2:12:00 PM

 
Very nice, enjoyed it very much :-)

Posted on 12/03/2007 at 9:12:00 PM

 
Nice contrasts and honesty. Thanks!

Posted on 12/03/2007 at 9:12:00 PM

 
Very nice

Posted on 12/03/2007 at 8:12:00 PM

 
Love it!

Posted on 12/03/2007 at 3:12:00 PM

 
A lovely poem. Thanks for sharing.

Posted on 12/02/2007 at 3:12:00 PM

 
:) thanks - you had me worried - I will keep it there so that people will know what this new comment is referring to lol

Posted on 12/02/2007 at 2:12:00 PM

 
I'm sorry about my comment down there it didn't come out right. I think all I meant to say was that when you say "you don't want to feel, or laugh, or cry, or whatever---I just think I still want you to do all those things in a good way. And "some more than others," meaning I want you to laugh more than cry. I was afraid after I submitted the comment that it might look like I was referring to some people more than others. Not at all. And about "as long as you keep writing poems we'll be OK"--- meaning as long as your still writing poems then you must be still doing all those things. I hope you understand, I mean it in a good way and I don't think it came out quite right. Please remove the comment

Posted on 12/02/2007 at 1:12:00 PM

 
How lovely, I enjoyed this.

Posted on 12/02/2007 at 11:12:00 AM

 
my first love is Jesus Christ :)

Posted on 12/02/2007 at 2:12:00 AM

 
I am confused????? Can you explain this Mike?

Posted on 12/02/2007 at 2:12:00 AM

 
I hope your messin' with me cause I want you to do it all---some more than others, of course---and congratulations on your first love. I guess as long as you want to keep writing poetry for us we'll be OK though. *****

Posted on 12/02/2007 at 1:12:00 AM

 
Thanks to you all :)

Posted on 12/01/2007 at 11:12:00 PM

 
Wonderful poem! You are very gifted. Thank you for sharing this.

Posted on 12/01/2007 at 11:12:00 PM

 
Excellent !...

Posted on 12/01/2007 at 10:12:00 PM

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