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Stupid Girl

By Travis Joe, published Dec 04, 2007
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Stupid Child

Selfish and Cold

So Tragic to behold

A retard for a mother

A lazy f*ck for a father

Corrupt thoughts of the mind

Hold you behind

Mistreat your grandfather

Your only grandfather

He gives you everything

For nothing

And in return

With no concern

Show disrespect

To a man who protects

You with a passion

You show a lack of compassion

Focused on your boyfriend

As if he is a godsend

Imagining love brought from Cupid

However you are just stupid.

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I like the rhythm and form of this one; sounds like almost every girl I ever dated before I found my soul mate (And we have been together 16 years!)

Posted on 12/05/2007 at 8:12:00 PM

 
Okay, I hope your poem isn't as personal as it sounds, if so, then its sad, if not- well, its still sad with a side order of giggle. : ) I read your description and had to read the rest. Good job on dragging me in. Best wishes, Kili

Posted on 12/04/2007 at 10:12:00 PM

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