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Christmas Trail Ride - a Rhymed Activity on the Nativity

(This Poem Recently Won 2nd Place for Professional Poetry in a Nationwide Christmas Horse Contest.)

By Linda Ann Nickerson, published Dec 10, 2007
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When Mary went to Bethlehem,
She rode atop an ass, but then,
The trail was arduous and coarse;
Perhaps she traveled on a horse.

Twas many miles from Nazareth,
A donkey'd have to catch his breath.
The Virgin, nine months pregnant, glowed.
A burro couldn't bear the load.

Perhaps it was a Quarterhorse,
She's have a sturdy frame, of course.
A Clydesdale, Holsteiner or Shire
Would carry her through mud and mire.

An Andalusian or Trakehner
Barrel-racing Paint or reiner
Would be perfect for the task,
Everything that Joseph asked.

A gaited horse or Thoroughbred,
A Shetland pony, bay or red,
Could have made the rustic trek,
Without strain to back or neck.

An Appy or Arabian
Could gladly see the journey done.
But donkey? Could he make the trip?
Would he buck, refuse, or flip?

A lovely horse would lend some class,
And yet, we're told it was an ass
That carried then the unborn King,
Divine humility to bring.

For quietly, the scene was set;
The inn, it had no rooms to let.
The beasts, they served as midwives there,
As our Creator came to share.

The King of Kings, born in a stall,
Amid the shavings, muck and all,
For glory comes in meeker clothes,
Not always just as we suppose.

Christmas Trail Ride - a Rhymed Activity on the Nativity

A lovely horse would lend some class, And yet, we're told it was an ass That carried then the unborn King, Divine humility to bring.

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Beautiful.

Posted on 12/14/2007 at 3:12:48 PM

 
Cute :)

Posted on 12/14/2007 at 8:12:59 AM

 
Deserved to win-enjoyed the poem.

Posted on 12/11/2007 at 11:12:19 PM

 
Wonderful!

Posted on 12/11/2007 at 5:12:03 PM

 
God has inspired you!

Posted on 12/11/2007 at 2:12:43 PM

 
Oh I love this one! Beautifully put my friend, thumbs up for Lori Piper's comment I couldn't agree more! I would be the first to buy your book, I would be buying them for friends for presents too, and I do mean that, signed copies would be great!!! robritt's comment was spot on!

Posted on 12/11/2007 at 12:12:17 AM

 
Very lovely

Posted on 12/10/2007 at 8:12:16 PM

 
I love horses too, can't you tell by my avatar? An interesting bit of trivia about the ancient Hebrew people; they did not use horses and shunned anyone that did. To them horses reminded them of their captivity in Egypt, where horses were a sign of power and wealth.

Posted on 12/10/2007 at 8:12:28 PM

 
Excelent as always, no wonder you won.

Posted on 12/10/2007 at 8:12:41 PM

 
all right Linda---when is your book coming out? I love all your poetry!!!!!!!

Posted on 12/10/2007 at 7:12:39 PM

 
Beautiful poem, beautifully written. I love the sentiment, too.

Posted on 12/10/2007 at 6:12:58 PM

 
That was great, very different! Well done!

Posted on 12/10/2007 at 5:12:40 PM

 
You definitely have an original voice and writing style!

Posted on 12/10/2007 at 4:12:39 PM

 
For complete contest results, please visit; THE SENTINEL: Voice of the Horse Industry in the Midwest at http://www.saddleshop.com/sentinel/sentinel-frames.htm

Posted on 12/10/2007 at 4:12:18 PM

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