Everyone Screams Tonight

Figure This Out... It is TRUE

By Kady the Hippie Woodstock, published Dec 16, 2007
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Everyone screams tonight
I'm sort of catonic
Amongst the low-riding bottoms clad and clean

The lightning outside
Puts us in a state
No more hippy music for a while just chill

You grab my little jacket
Nah! I know you're alright
But you put my finger to you jugular, I grin

I'm sick of cooking burgers
Someone else comes up to me
She's grabbing al the ketchup, people mad

Everyone screams tonight
Delilah plays through my little house
Gosh, you stare, I want to be amazed

I guess I am disguise

I guess I am

I pause to write this among the din and noise

You grin at me under paper Chinese lanterns
I think of Ken my total zen friend

This is in real time

I'm not really in disguise

I guess I am

But

Tony

You know me

This poem

If for all the screaming people

(and the hanburgers)

It's not even a poem

Just a real-time thought



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I love the flow of the poem, it reads like a story-all poems are short stories in actuality. I will add you to my favorite list, thanks for the wonderful comment on my poetry.

Posted on 12/18/2007 at 11:12:38 AM

 
Well Kady, I can say that I have a few typo errors in the beginning of my first written work, at first glance it makes one very upset that not double checking for typo errors. This is why I have spellcheck installed on my tool-bar so that I may correct miss-spellings on Internet pages.

Posted on 12/18/2007 at 11:12:39 AM

 
Im not exactly sure what this poem means, but my guess is that you are looking for that tiny fragment of peace amid all the chaos that is life...Anyway that is how I see it...Great poem.

Posted on 12/16/2007 at 8:12:07 PM

 
Kady, a fawn goes into the forest, does a deer come out of the woods.(ARIA by Yanni listen to it) appreciate who you are. ken

Posted on 12/16/2007 at 7:12:48 PM

 
You have a lot of things going on at one time. Kinda like I do a lot of times??? Is that it? Good poem either way~

Posted on 12/16/2007 at 7:12:19 PM

 
Okay I guess the typo is in the 9th line...uggg..sorry

Posted on 12/16/2007 at 7:12:32 PM

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