Free Ticket

By Nicholas Smoke, published Dec 18, 2007
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A woman once gave me a ticket,
To the world's greatest show,
Told me it'd be much better,
Than any I'd seen before,

The show goes on forever,
Nobody wants it to end,
It draws in the greatest souls,
And together they shall mend,

She didn't want my money,
Or anything in trade,
She didn't want my soul,
Or anything I've made,

Didn't want a favor,
Or any promises,
Didn't want anything,
I couldn't comprehend,

No need to repay me,
She said with a smile,
The ticket was your's,
I just held on to it for a while.



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A very good poem, your writing is so good. Thank you for sharing your work with us all.

Posted on 12/30/2007 at 11:12:56 PM

 
Good poem and great sentiment expressed. :)

Posted on 12/29/2007 at 2:12:05 PM

 
Great poem! You are very talented!

Posted on 12/27/2007 at 10:12:27 AM

 
What a great gift :-)

Posted on 12/24/2007 at 9:12:15 AM

 
This is very good. Thank you for finding me, so I could discover these great poems!

Posted on 12/22/2007 at 8:12:00 PM

 
Nicely done. Holds the reader's attention all the way through. Thank you for stopping by and for your kind sentiment.. aloha from Hawaii.. alisa ;-)

Posted on 12/22/2007 at 6:12:29 PM

 
this is great! What a great lady to give you such a thoughtful gift!!!! That speaks from the heart!!! I really enjoyed your writing and I am starting to become a fan of yours, rather quickly I believe!

Posted on 12/22/2007 at 12:12:01 PM

 
Brilliant !!! I really like this !!!

Posted on 12/18/2007 at 12:12:58 PM

 
Wonderful Nicholas, very nice!

Posted on 12/18/2007 at 10:12:53 AM

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