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By Gone With The Wind, published Dec 18, 2007
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When there are: other shores unfathomed,
There are paradise scenarios untouched,
Deep in the imaginations of men:
Hopes and dreams are built with fashion,
Each stone cut with precision.
When there are truths untold,
There are dreams unimagined.

When there are words that heal,
And no one speaks,
Then the hardship is unlearned.
No one is there to question the flow,
Of the same boring language.

When there are other hopes untouched
Those which we do not gather,
We find sanctuary, in the unknowing.
We find remorse in our failure to act.
Our willingness to not see,
Rules the vision we don't have.

When there are words that heal,
And no one speaks, then the hardship is unlearned,
The experience was for naught.
The words were just words.
The dreams were just thoughts.

I hear the sound of the ocean:
Inside: Of this tiny shell.
I see my ship sailing,
From the harmony locked inside this little creature.

When there are truths untold,
There are dreams unimagined.
There are: Places unseen.



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True; too bad we can't bring our self's to do it sometimes. You know---when we know that we can make everything better by just saying what needs to be said to clear things up, but still we refuse to clue them in because we're hurt by something they did that perhaps they don't know we know about. I don't know If that makes any sense, anyway this poem certainly makes sense to me---great job!

Posted on 12/19/2007 at 4:12:34 PM

 
Nice one here!! I am a dreamer and like to know that they all will come true :)

Posted on 12/19/2007 at 12:12:44 PM

 
Dreams are the begining of action. Thank You fer sharin'. Merry Christmas. ;-}}>

Posted on 12/19/2007 at 8:12:35 AM

 
DREAM on my friend ARTME

Posted on 12/19/2007 at 7:12:15 AM

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