Saraswati

Nicholas Smoke
Nicholas Smoke
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Fly,
With the wind,
Oh,
Bird of life,

Follow,
The shadows,
Of,
The setting sun,

Into,
The darkness,
Fear,
Nothing,
For,
You are safe,

Free,
In creation,
Feel,
The flow,
Of,
Her love.


 
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Wonderful! I like the flow!

Posted on 01/11/2008 at 8:01:35 PM

I love the flow ... it just works in such a great way.

Posted on 01/06/2008 at 11:01:04 AM

BEAUTIFUL!!! Truely a work of art! and the picture was nice too.

Posted on 12/30/2007 at 11:12:52 PM

I love the creative flow... GREAT POEM!!! *****

Posted on 12/29/2007 at 1:12:57 PM

I reread this and loved it better the second time! man, you are totally inspired! Do you know that? Wel, you should know that! This was and is GREAT!!!!!

Posted on 12/27/2007 at 10:12:01 PM

i am a hindu boy, and happy to see that you like our goddess.

Posted on 12/27/2007 at 9:12:25 AM

i li8ke the descriptiveness of the poem. they way it flows. it is a quick read that keeps the atttention of it's audience.

Posted on 12/27/2007 at 1:12:19 AM

I like this. The form is incredible.

Posted on 12/24/2007 at 8:12:13 PM

what a great way to describe the sensation of falling in love.. aloha..;-0

Posted on 12/23/2007 at 9:12:21 PM

oh, this is inspiring!!!!!! I love your poem. It is so clean and fresh. Does that make sense? It's so new!!! I love your picture too! Great job on this!!!

Posted on 12/23/2007 at 10:12:57 AM

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