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Nicholas Smoke
Nicholas Smoke
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Sever the attachments,
The strings,
From ourselves,
From our mind,
Eliminate,
The conditioning,
That makes us,
Mechanical,
Predictable,
Liberate us,
From ourselves,
From our mind,
Extinguish,
The self,
That makes us,
Devour,
Reconnect,
Our soul,
To the source,
That makes us,
True,
Let us be,
Honest,
To our nature,
So,
We can see,
Our inside.



 
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what I get from this piece is that to see oneself completely, in all of its entirety, you have to actually strip away what lies on the surface, to truelly convey yourself as a whole. this is really amazing work, thanks for letting me get a glimpse.

Posted on 01/18/2008 at 11:01:53 AM

This is brilliant work !!..I love the words conveyed here !!

Posted on 01/14/2008 at 12:01:53 PM

Incredible work! I truly enjoy your writings.

Posted on 01/11/2008 at 8:01:27 PM

Fantastic work!

Posted on 01/06/2008 at 11:01:43 AM

I love this! I love this! Great job on this, Nicholas! you are SMOKIN'!!!!!

Posted on 12/31/2007 at 10:12:29 AM

Seeking disconnection of soul and body- implies that there is a clear reason for removing the mask of Ego. Many powerful themes woven within this one. Nicely done!

Posted on 12/30/2007 at 11:12:26 PM

Sometimes, with the world around us, demanding the conditioning that makes us,so mechanical,so predictable, and so very unobtrusive....we lose track of who we were really supposed to be! Your words seem to speak to that soul...... lost,( or possibly hiding from the conditioners,) in an effort to retain some semblance of the free spirited,spontaneous,"Let the world know that I've arrived," soul that we all started out with. Your writing gives food for thought, Awesome style! And Thank You for the encouraging compliment on my content!!

Posted on 12/30/2007 at 11:12:26 PM

This is awesome! A great testament to free-thinkers everywhere. Good job!

Posted on 12/30/2007 at 2:12:25 PM

This is wonderful...we all need to disconnect ourselves every now and then...Great work, Nicholas!

Posted on 12/30/2007 at 1:12:52 PM

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