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Four Leaf Clover

For Cody

By Mandy Kaye, published Jan 04, 2008
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You have been gone for far too long
Through the mist and distant fog
I hear your voice in the dead of night
Screaming pains "This isn't right."
I found a friend and you kept me warm
You held my hand through a dreadful storm
With thoughts and coffee you broke the wall
Winter came, the end of Fall
And with it brought a soft goodbye
Sometimes in life we don't ask why
Accepting fate and travel plans
That carry us to distant lands
But in my heart you'll always be
Long after you've forgotten me
In my mind it isn't over
I still have, my friend, a four leaf clover

Four Leaf Clover

Pressed four leaf clover

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This is really good art in words....

Posted on 06/28/2008 at 8:06:17 AM

 
Very nice. You did well with this poem without being sappy or pretentious. Good job!

Posted on 05/28/2008 at 1:05:18 AM

 
I like the beat that you you have through out the poem...it has nice rhyming and flow. Good job.

Posted on 03/21/2008 at 11:03:54 AM

 
Well worth the wait, I must admit. This one is my favorite so far, by far

Posted on 01/27/2008 at 8:01:07 PM

 
Very touching, and warm. I like it.good write.alterz.

Posted on 01/07/2008 at 9:01:22 PM

 
Beautiful!!

Posted on 01/04/2008 at 9:01:52 PM

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