My Dear Father at the Beginning of My School Days

By SAIKAT KUMAR DUTTA, published Jan 06, 2008
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It was a day of summer,
He was holding my finger,
And, that was a bright sunny morning,
For the first time towards school, I was going.

It was a day raining heavily,
And I missed my school bus unfortunately,
He took me within his arm machinery,
To send me properly within my school boundary.

It was the day; I got first time full marks in maths,
He kissed my forehead and gave me several hugs,
I was really happy and bright then indeed,
Like a new plant was originated from a dormant seed.

It was a day of the season of winter,
To stay at home I was wearing a sweater,
If I found in front his warm court covered lap,
I hardly interested to wear a warm dress and a head cap.



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This one truly moves me, Thank you

Posted on 04/19/2008 at 10:04:07 AM

 
Another sweet poem!

Posted on 03/12/2008 at 8:03:07 AM

 
A poem that we can see and feel. Thanks for sharing one so personal and sweet.

Posted on 01/14/2008 at 11:01:02 AM

 
Great memory and very sweet poem.

Posted on 01/10/2008 at 4:01:16 PM

 
I'm am sorry for your loss. This is a wonderful poem and a lovely memory!

Posted on 01/09/2008 at 5:01:35 PM

 
beautiful words about beautiful memories

Posted on 01/09/2008 at 2:01:46 PM

 
Very lovely poem! It's good to always remember how our loved one live instead the other way around. Once again, a great poem! :-)

Posted on 01/08/2008 at 12:01:13 PM

 
What a wonderful memory, and I too am sorry for your loss.

Posted on 01/07/2008 at 10:01:43 PM

 
I'm sure your father is every bit as proud of you in the afterlife as he was on Earth. Well done!

Posted on 01/07/2008 at 7:01:11 PM

 
Very touching poem of a wonderful memory :-)

Posted on 01/07/2008 at 12:01:15 PM

 
Warm and comforting memories.

Posted on 01/07/2008 at 7:01:21 AM

 
What a beautiful memorial to your father.

Posted on 01/06/2008 at 6:01:15 PM

 
Very touching. This was beautiful.

Posted on 01/06/2008 at 5:01:34 PM

 
Sweet memory. Writing during times of loss help us deal with the grief.

Posted on 01/06/2008 at 4:01:38 PM

 
My condolences Saikat..I understand that you just had this loss...May your angels comfort you. It was a very lovely poem and a wonderful tribute to him!

Posted on 01/06/2008 at 3:01:13 PM

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