Timeworn

By Doreen Bradley Satter, published Jan 06, 2008
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Timeworn

I am an old gray woman,

Sit a moment and let me talk.

Let me wander to other times...

To other seasons...

Or maybe it was only yesterday.

I need someone to listen,

Let me pretend that you care...

About what I say...

About who I was...

About who I am...

Now I am an old gray woman,

But once I was part of a rainbow.

Timeworn
Timeworn

Rainbow Woman

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What a lovely poem -Gray is beautiful.

Posted on 03/08/2008 at 10:03:54 AM

 
Wow. I didn't expect it to end that way. It makes it much deeper! Great poem!

Posted on 03/07/2008 at 1:03:58 PM

 
THANK YOU so much everyone. I LOVE your comments!

Posted on 02/11/2008 at 1:02:35 PM

 
Aw that is beautiful and I relate to it a lot. Beautiful and so well said. i love the I used to be a rainbow. I think you still are.

Posted on 02/03/2008 at 8:02:57 PM

 
I like your poetry as well as your health articles.

Posted on 01/12/2008 at 5:01:50 AM

 
Still colorful - in words and stories and poetry, etc . . .

Posted on 01/08/2008 at 7:01:59 PM

 
Thanks, David. I agree entirely. Gray is very important!

Posted on 01/06/2008 at 11:01:00 PM

 
Doreen- From one no-longer-young person to another- Gray is an important part of the rainbow! Without it, the other colors would gleam less brilliantly. Without age, there can be no youth. N'est pas? Lovely poem. David

Posted on 01/06/2008 at 8:01:18 PM

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