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Winter Lament

(Waiting for Spring)

By Lisa Renee., published Jan 14, 2008
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Rain falls steady;
The day looks like night;
Cold and unforgiving;
Relentless and unyielding;
Chills body and soul;
Barren and empty;
Echoes of silence;
Abandoned and lifeless;
Until the warmth of spring;
Winter clouds dissipate;
Reveals the golden sun;
Brown is turned to green;
The trees are filled with music;
Bushes bloom with lilacs;
Flowers in my garden grow;
Until this day I must wait;
And be surrounded by ice and snow.



 
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Winter Lament

I am waiting for Spring.

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ALL OF IT beautifully written....

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Posted on 01/18/2008 at 11:01:33 AM

 
"Abandoned and lifeless; Until the warmth of spring; Winter clouds dissipate; Reveals the golden sun;" Beautifully written Lisa.

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Posted on 01/18/2008 at 11:01:03 AM

 
Another terrific poem! This is why you are on my Fav's list! :)

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Posted on 01/15/2008 at 10:01:37 AM

 
Your poems are quite an enjyoment to read...

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Posted on 01/14/2008 at 11:01:17 PM

 
Very beautiful. I love your imagery. It's going to get a lot colder around here before we see spring.

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Posted on 01/14/2008 at 10:01:05 PM

 
Spring me -baby ARTME

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Posted on 01/14/2008 at 6:01:41 PM

 
GOOD ONE, I FEEL THE SAME WAY ABOUT WINTER, GOOD THING IT DON'T GET THAT COLD IN Beaumont, texas.GOOD WRITE.LATERZ

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Posted on 01/14/2008 at 5:01:55 PM

 
nice imagery

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Posted on 01/14/2008 at 4:01:18 PM

 
Very nice.

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Posted on 01/14/2008 at 4:01:48 PM

 
Very very nice. I love this lisa!

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Posted on 01/14/2008 at 3:01:31 PM

 
I know how depressing winter can be! But looking forward to the Spring is a chance for a renewed life! Great poem, sis! *****

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Posted on 01/14/2008 at 2:01:34 PM

 
When read aloud, one can almost hear the music background. Moody Blues, "Days of Future Past" album.

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Posted on 01/14/2008 at 1:01:19 PM

 
I love the rhythm in your poem, awaiting spring i am too lol, the seasons of change are so perfect!!! *****

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Posted on 01/14/2008 at 12:01:55 PM

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