Dream of Vishnu

A Dream

By Kady the Hippie Woodstock, published Jan 16, 2008
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I stood across from you
Your avatars surround me
I watch them as they watch me
We are reverse stories of each other

I stood across from you
You ask me to enter
I don't understand you
Reading me in the future

I stood across from you
Watched as you step across
Earth and all its inhabitants
Upon waking I am confused

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I'm still dreamy here.. Very neat poem Kady! :-)

Posted on 01/17/2008 at 10:01:44 AM

 
Ohhhh confusingly clever :)

Posted on 01/16/2008 at 6:01:09 PM

 
Excellent! :-)

Posted on 01/16/2008 at 4:01:58 PM

 
Oh WOW !!...I love this one !!

Posted on 01/16/2008 at 4:01:51 PM

 
Wow...cool poem, sis.

Posted on 01/16/2008 at 3:01:38 PM

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