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BLACK HEART

INTO the FIRE

By Mike Sutherland, published Jan 18, 2008
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Rating: 4.7 of 5
Take This Heart
Made Of Purist Gold

It Cannot Withstand
All The Love That I Hold

It Is No Longer
Of Any Use To Me

It Is As Soft And As Weak
As Precious Metal Can Be

I Want A New Heart
That Is STRONG & True

A Heart That Will Not Give
And Make Me Act Like A Fool

So Back Into The Fire
This Heart Of Mine Goes

At The Hands Of Gobban Saer
For Only He Knows

How To Craft A Cathedral
And A Heart Made Of Steel

Strong Enough To Withstand
All The Love That I Feel

A Heart That Is Malleable
To Bend Without Breaking.

Yet, Tough Enough To Deflect
A Love That Is Faking

He Will Forge Me A New Heart
Made Of Stainless Steel

And Make Me A Healthy One
With No Need To Heal

With An Ingot Of Iron
From The Darkest Of Mountains

Extract All The Sorrow
That Overflows From This Fountain

Mined By A Madman
That Searches In Vain

For A Heart Made Of Gold
From An Iron Ore Vein

With Hammer And Anvil
Let The Sparks Fly

Pound Out All The Pain
That wants me to Cry

Then Back Into The Fire
To Make It Red Hot

With A Bellow In Hand. . .
Fan Out All Of The Rot.

The Smoldering Ashes
That Fly Through The Air

Will Rise Up Into Heaven
And Return Up There

If It Cools Too Quickly
I'm Sure You Will Find

That A Hairline Crack
Will Shatter In Time

So Inspect My New Heart
With A Good Going Over

In Case I'm Ever Wrong Again
And I Have To Let Go Her

No Alchemy Needed
For This Transformation

The Tears I Have Shed
Enough Purification

An Immortal Gift
For The Fled Goibnenn Feast

The Elixir Of Life
That I Love In The Least



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Okay, my favorite line is no alchemy needed for this transformation. You always pick your lines from mine, so it's my turn to return the favor. That line spoke volums to me in sooo many ways. Masterpiece once again Mike!!

Posted on 03/24/2008 at 4:03:57 PM

 
This is such an original recipe for mending a broken heart--don't mend it, start over. And in starting over, throw out the qualities that are usually heralded as the best. You know, Proverbs says that the third and fourth worst sins are naivete and gullibility. You seem to have just restated that ancient and true Wisdom in your own very original way. Well Done.

Posted on 02/10/2008 at 9:02:48 AM

 
love this very lovely!

Posted on 02/04/2008 at 1:02:47 PM

 
I love this....absolutely love it. Soft and weak hearts are pure gold and they are the best that anyone could ever get. :)

Posted on 01/29/2008 at 7:01:07 PM

 
If I could rhyme words like that I would stop boring you all with analytical articles about my relationship. :) *****

Posted on 01/29/2008 at 1:01:23 PM

 
Well, I would have to disagree with you Butterfly---but your comment is very flattering and I want to thank you and everybody else who has commented on my stuff. Just a hint to save you some time though--it has been my experience that the people who have commented on my work are the most talented of all and you will find some of the most heartfelt and amazing poetry on their pages. That being said, there is a lot of other stuff on their favorites that is really good too and I still am still getting around to discovering all that talent and hard work out there. Thank you all very much.

Posted on 01/28/2008 at 1:01:18 PM

 
Mike, this is amazing beyond words. The best of all I have read here yet. There are some very talented people here, but this is honestly the best so far. I believe the reason is that it came from deep within your soul, and that is always the best. This reaches me on a very personal level, and I thank you for sharing it with us. I am definately looking forward to reading more of your awesome work!

Posted on 01/28/2008 at 8:01:17 AM

 
I love this!

Posted on 01/27/2008 at 11:01:05 AM

 
Excellent!

Posted on 01/24/2008 at 1:01:40 AM

 
Mike this is exactly what I meant about your passion being so powerful. When you are brave enough to say what you really feel- it is breathtaking. I loved the double meaning about soft precious metal...and crafting a cathedral (a holy sanctuary of the heart) out of steel- for while the gold is beautiful it cannot stand the heat of your desire. Magnificent work!

Posted on 01/23/2008 at 9:01:34 AM

 
Yaay bravo Mike! I really enjoy perusing this poem! It's sensational with all its mythical form! I hope all broken hearts are mended as they should be. :-)

Posted on 01/22/2008 at 7:01:33 PM

 
Incredible Mike!!! I absolutely love the strength and endurance the heart can withstand!!! *****

Posted on 01/19/2008 at 9:01:30 AM

 
This is awesome, dude! I believe THIS is you masterpiece! And may God be with you on every step on your quest to Oz, Tinman!

Posted on 01/19/2008 at 8:01:13 AM

 
Absolutely amazing! Definitely 5 stars! I'd give it more if I could.

Posted on 01/19/2008 at 7:01:28 AM

 
Damn good job Mike, I am in hopes you find the heart you want and if you do, let me know where i can get the same kind. Dont think mine is much good anymore. Too many cracks, from the love that I lack, maybe just maybe, in the future to come, you and I both, will find that special one, and when we do, it will all be won. A time to start over, A time to start new, A time to start finding, A love that is true. For we deserve it, It is our time, hope you have enjoyed, this little rhyme. Ken

Posted on 01/18/2008 at 11:01:47 PM

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