Neglectful Disempowerment

By Rebecca DeLuccia, published Jan 30, 2008
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Rating: 4.6 of 5
No courage inside,

The weakness will consume her

Melt her into earth.

Dig trenches too deep,

Overflow with too much talk,

Separate the weeds.

Power of each word

Not spoken but kept inside

Rob strength from her soul.

A face frozen in expectation can become cold and hard as ice. Say something nice to your daughter today!

Credit: semacc

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A gain and again I wish to congratulate you for propagating noble things and lofty ideas.

Posted on 04/16/2008 at 12:04:44 PM

 
A good job.

Posted on 03/29/2008 at 11:03:08 AM

 
Fantastic read, very intense!

Posted on 02/27/2008 at 8:02:12 AM

 
You are a great philosopher!How dense are your thoughts!How deep you delve in human behaviour and its analysis! You are GREAT!

Posted on 02/24/2008 at 5:02:18 PM

 
heavy stuff-- Im afraid to get inside your head--too much intense thinking going on

Posted on 02/03/2008 at 6:02:07 PM

 
Wow this was incredibly thought provoking and it definitely pulled at me - Very Good :)

Posted on 01/30/2008 at 3:01:14 PM

 
Very deep and meaningful 5 Stars from me!

Posted on 01/30/2008 at 3:01:34 PM

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