It's Not that Cold Outside

It's cold outside, so cold.
I want to do it, but yet I feel so cold.
I want to do something it's what I should do.
I hear a noise a car maybe.
No I would be to slow but I want to do it.
It's just so cold.
I'm thirsty, but it's all ice no water.

Am I making a good choice if I don't do it?
Oh alright I will do it.
She will eventually come and look for me.
Maybe she will have the leash this time.
I hate it when she pulls me by the collar.
I find the noise. I chase it.

Suddenly it's not so cold outside.

 
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That's really cute, I love poetry

Posted on 03/08/2008 at 11:03:05 AM

very nice

Posted on 02/19/2008 at 5:02:20 AM

Hey, you must be reading my German Shorthair Pointer's mind! This describes him perfectly. :)

Posted on 02/12/2008 at 7:02:51 AM

=)

Posted on 02/10/2008 at 6:02:27 AM

I would be excited about a leash too!

Posted on 02/10/2008 at 12:02:28 AM

I should have known better than to click on this. I had just warmed up with a cup of tea, and now I'm shivering again! hahaha... I'm only teasing... this was very clever. You have an interesting point of view!

Posted on 02/07/2008 at 8:02:07 PM

Very cute!

Posted on 02/07/2008 at 8:02:27 AM

Very cute & creative! I love the point of view!

Posted on 02/07/2008 at 7:02:12 AM

I enjoyed this very much!

Posted on 02/06/2008 at 9:02:41 PM

So funny, didn't get the point of view immediately but when I did, I was charmed!

Posted on 02/06/2008 at 7:02:27 PM

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