Just Tell Me that You Love Me

By Lisa Renee., published Feb 12, 2008
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Candy is so sweet, like a lover's kiss;
But a chocolate-covered heart;
Brings not my mind to bliss;
A rose of passionate red;
A scent of love's desire;
Just tell me that you love me instead;
That is all that my soul requires;
It is not that I don't want to receive;
These token gifts you bring;
Filled with love and good intentions;
A stuffed bear or a gemstone ring;
I need only your love and your heart so true;
Cherish me everyday, my love;
And I will do the same for you;



Just Tell Me that You Love Me

Candy and flowers are great to receive on Valentines Day...but...

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Strong and true message wrapped in silky sentiment makes this plea ever the more powerful. Well done.

Posted on 02/17/2008 at 9:02:14 AM

 
Beautiful!

Posted on 02/16/2008 at 8:02:08 AM

 
give me candy... ARTME

Posted on 02/14/2008 at 2:02:03 PM

 
love it!!!!!!!!!!!!! just so beautiful

Posted on 02/14/2008 at 5:02:28 AM

 
Very lovely poem, very hot sweet my dear sister. I liked it very much.

Posted on 02/14/2008 at 5:02:36 AM

 
you are very much loved. Ken

Posted on 02/12/2008 at 10:02:31 PM

 
Excelent poem! How many times have I seen this sort of thing? A lover (or even child) showered with extravagant gifts, but were NEVER once told they were loved!

Posted on 02/12/2008 at 6:02:33 PM

 
ahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted on 02/12/2008 at 4:02:46 PM

 
Beautiful.

Posted on 02/12/2008 at 4:02:45 PM

 
WOnderful as always!

Posted on 02/12/2008 at 2:02:14 PM

 
You're a lyricist now! Pick a key, strum a tune! You've got a song!

Posted on 02/12/2008 at 2:02:57 PM

 
This is so beautiful!!!! Sis, it really speaks to me!!!!! *************************

Posted on 02/12/2008 at 1:02:36 PM

 
I lvoe this poem, def one of my favorites i think this is wat most girls hope for love over presents i know i do !!! *****

Posted on 02/12/2008 at 1:02:52 PM

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