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Going to the Lake Again

By James Ford, published Feb 21, 2008
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Going to the lake again

hanging with the snakes again

laughing, dreaming

rhyming scheming

it's all about the tease

you'll have me when I'm on my knees

until then

twist and shout

banter and pout

make yourself wet

I'm standing on the shore

wrapped in a towel.

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Oh, that's wonderful! It flows so nicely. Looking forward to reading more.

Posted on 03/09/2008 at 9:03:30 AM

 
I really enjoyed this. :)

Posted on 02/22/2008 at 4:02:17 PM

 
Thanks gals. I had a lot of fun writing it. Glad you liked it.

Posted on 02/21/2008 at 7:02:19 PM

 
This is great, I like this alot.

Posted on 02/21/2008 at 6:02:07 PM

 
Fantastic work here !!!!

Posted on 02/21/2008 at 4:02:49 PM

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