Sweet Silence

By Quixotic_Kiss, published Feb 27, 2008
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" The words you've written
Circle in my brain
Like a silent tornado
Breaking down my pain
With your sweet love's rapture
Whispered out of sight
Giving my greif
A feeling of delight
Like sweet honey suckles
On a humming birds lips
Pour your necture into me
Like a glistening stream to the bay
Tortured envy of me
Feeling this way
Our sweet silence written
On restricted paper
Where our hearts will stay
O if silence were ever so sweet
It would be today! "

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Very nice work.

Posted on 05/15/2008 at 7:05:06 PM

 
"Sweet Silence"...soooo beautiful !!!!

Posted on 03/02/2008 at 2:03:11 PM

 
silent is my name beautiful poem your word chosen so well

Posted on 02/28/2008 at 8:02:24 PM

 
Beautiful selection of words; I love the way you inclose your "poems" with quotation marks to emphasize the entirety of your thoughts. Not to be taken individually only, but the whole thought at once also. As if the words are spoken as well and not just read. Great work. *****

Posted on 02/27/2008 at 11:02:02 PM

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