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A Commercial Friend

By Quixotic_Kiss, published Mar 07, 2008
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" Have you ever had
A commercial friend?
Someone that makes
False advertisements
Their full of sh**
Their make pretend
Always selling the best product
With no guarantee of a refund
But, will keep a lie going
As long as an infomercial
Don't sign me up for that plan
You ain't no friend of mine
I ain't no commercial friend! "



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Very strongly written...great job on this!

Posted on 03/08/2008 at 10:03:09 AM

 
Wow!!!!! A different way to say it..... But metaphoracally (is that a word?)speaking, I think everybody has friends of this nature at one time or another in their life. Good work

Posted on 03/08/2008 at 9:03:44 AM

 
Good job!

Posted on 03/08/2008 at 8:03:03 AM

 
Good Metaphor!

Posted on 03/07/2008 at 8:03:20 PM

 
tell it

Posted on 03/07/2008 at 8:03:14 PM

 
tell it

Posted on 03/07/2008 at 8:03:13 PM

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