Find » Prose » Poetry » Week- End

Week- End

--Freer Verse

By ILAKKUVANAR MARAIMALAI, published Mar 13, 2008
Published Content: 102  Total Views: 10,844  Favorited By: 38 CPs
Embed:  
Rating: 4.6 of 5
Every week-end
turns into a mirage
exhausting all my energy
I am running vigorously
with a hope that I may
quench my thirst
in the week-end!

Comments
Comments 1 - 15 of 18
Next >>
 
Haugh only when the weekend comes laughing for me

Posted on 06/20/2008 at 10:06:01 AM

 
Terrific!! I love this!! 5 stars!

Posted on 04/25/2008 at 4:04:23 PM

 
This is really nice!!

Posted on 03/31/2008 at 10:03:26 AM

 
This is great!! Thanks for sharing with us

Posted on 03/30/2008 at 7:03:29 AM

 
It's a shame most of life is a rush . . . . there are so many good things to experience. I love walking on the beach here in Naples, Florida, USA - taking in all the beautiful scenes . . . . looking at colorful seashells and pelicans flying across the blue sky. No matter where one lives, there is beauty around - even in the small things such as tiny flowers and colorful pebbles. Even a warm breeze creating movement in the leaves of trees is soothing. I wish you well. Debby

Posted on 03/29/2008 at 5:03:16 PM

 
Wonderful!

Posted on 03/29/2008 at 4:03:59 PM

 
I'm just glad it is spring break, too :)

Posted on 03/29/2008 at 12:03:58 PM

 
Hi Sir, My 5 Stars.

Posted on 03/29/2008 at 12:03:47 AM

 
This poem made my weekend!!! Good to read this. Philip

Posted on 03/29/2008 at 12:03:15 AM

 
I love weekens too , my hole faimly home, our maybe i like week days better,,,, hehehe Sometime I just love me ......ARTME

Posted on 03/19/2008 at 7:03:04 AM

 
very nice read. Good job.

Posted on 03/17/2008 at 9:03:25 AM

 
Excelent job, sir, and I hope you had an awesome weekend as well!

Posted on 03/15/2008 at 11:03:56 PM

 
As long as I get to go fishing, my thirst is quinched every time. Great job!

Posted on 03/14/2008 at 3:03:42 PM

 
I know the feeling!!!!! Hope you have a great weekend!!!!! ****************************************************************

Posted on 03/14/2008 at 1:03:19 PM

 
I think so many have felt just as you describe in your poem. Enjoyed as always :-)

Posted on 03/13/2008 at 9:03:04 PM

Type in Your Comments Below - (1000 characters left)
Your name:

Submit your own content on this or any topic. Get started »
Comments 1 - 15 of 18
Next >>
Advertisment