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Thank God for the Bible's Hope for My Suffering

By Waldorf PC, published Mar 25, 2008
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If hell was a burning fire

I'm right there in it.

The flames of pain won't cease.

No matter what I do,

They won't go out.

Water and baking soda isn't cutting it.

If hell really smelled like sulfur and brimstone,

The stench is strong in my nostrils.

This misery totally reeks!

I try to spray the perfume of joy.

The ugly smells linger.

It just won't go away.

If hell was a place of eternal torment,

I'm feeling it.

The tormentous misery just won't let up.

I distract myself.

I plea and plea.

The torture is just endless.

Thank God hell is only the grave.

It is a place where only we sleep in death.

No pain, torment, or suffering abounds.

Oh, how comforting this is to me.

But the weight of misery

And the flames of pain

Keep on burning on.

And if hell were all of these things.

I'd say that I'm right there in it.

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So vivid..Wow!

Posted on 04/23/2008 at 2:04:38 PM

 
Wow! Great poem. Very vivid.

Posted on 04/21/2008 at 6:04:08 PM

 
Very strong poem. Sorry for your lost

Posted on 04/17/2008 at 8:04:49 PM

 
great poem. There is a lot feeling in it.

Posted on 04/17/2008 at 7:04:10 PM

 
Very powerful.

Posted on 03/31/2008 at 12:03:56 PM

 
Very emotional and strong words. Well done!

Posted on 03/30/2008 at 10:03:24 PM

 
I am sorry for you loss and pain. Very powerful poem.

Posted on 03/29/2008 at 10:03:06 PM

 
Powerful.

Posted on 03/28/2008 at 10:03:41 PM

 
how touching, great job

Posted on 03/28/2008 at 7:03:22 PM

 
Sorry for the pain underlying the moving words.

Posted on 03/26/2008 at 7:03:00 PM

 
Very powerful.

Posted on 03/26/2008 at 9:03:32 AM

 
Love it!

Posted on 03/25/2008 at 6:03:29 PM

 
Very strong!

Posted on 03/25/2008 at 2:03:32 PM

 
loved the poem. Very deep.

Posted on 03/25/2008 at 1:03:16 PM

 
Wow.

Posted on 03/25/2008 at 10:03:39 AM

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