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POEM: I Walk Through LIfe

By Pure Writing, published Mar 29, 2008
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As I walk through life.

Trying to erase her site.

Off my mind.

But, she was not so kind.

I walk everday.

With no faith.

Or, maybe a picture.

Is all I got for memories.

She just stepped on me.

I walk through life.

Thinking of you.

Or, just thinking of your games.

You played on me.

It's kind of funny.

How you don't know I'm writing about you.

For sure.

I will keep on walking.

Lost, and without no joking.

FIN

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There is a reason for all and that is true. Learning and growing are the fruits of our hardships. :-) Keep your head up and keep walking. :-)

Posted on 05/05/2008 at 12:05:42 AM

 
Good job. As I read your poem I thought of the song with the hook. "I bet you think this song is about you."

Posted on 05/01/2008 at 5:05:06 AM

 
This is beautiful also Thanks again :-)

Posted on 04/25/2008 at 11:04:20 PM

 
awesome poem!

Posted on 04/11/2008 at 2:04:48 AM

 
I really love this one!!!!!! Great job!!!!! *****************************************************************************************

Posted on 04/03/2008 at 8:04:16 AM

 
Wow take the s out of she and he works for me! Great poem that I can truly relate to.

Posted on 04/02/2008 at 10:04:07 PM

 
Thank you guys for the support, I really try, I'll check out ya work soon.laterz.

Posted on 03/30/2008 at 9:03:50 PM

 
Wonderful poem...great job!

Posted on 03/30/2008 at 4:03:35 PM

 
5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted on 03/30/2008 at 5:03:21 AM

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