Uugh Love

By Quixotic_Kiss, published Apr 01, 2008
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" My heart dropped
To the pit of my stomach
When I read the reasons why
The messages your heart bleeds
Explains the tears that leave your eyes
And now I'm crippled
I don't know what to do
Because all I really wanted
Was you
I was stuck on the defense line
For a long time
But, i let the guard down
For you
He wants us to just be friends
Now to my heart
That wouldn't be true
So what the hell is a girl to do
When my heart is shattered
To a billion pieces
That no glue could fix
Tell me whats the reason love
What kind of happy ending is this? "

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You paint very emotional and vivid pictures with your poetry.

Posted on 04/27/2008 at 9:04:42 PM

 
Beautiful and heartbreaking...well done Jesslyn.

Posted on 04/01/2008 at 10:04:41 PM

 
So sad, but beautifully written!

Posted on 04/01/2008 at 9:04:49 PM

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