FATHER

Fathered is True Sacrifice

By tattoo sn, published Apr 04, 2008
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Father..............

In your eyes, saving many event

Your bone in your face

Describe your heavy struggle

Your strong arms

Now black and burn under the light sun

Thin and wrapped

To passing your so much more heavy life

But you are always a patient

Father.............

In the silent night

I call in your name

I am in longing

To harvest our dry grapes

In our narrow garden

That hauled

Largeness industrial era

But it is just a dreamy

Come in my sleeping

Your son.............

I am in trouble

To passing barricade this true life.

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I think I can understand your feelings for your father. Lovely poem.Makes us respect and admire your father. Like you, I too consider myself to be the most fortunate person for having one of the best fathers.

Posted on 08/17/2008 at 9:08:06 AM

 
Great poem honoring the sacrifices of your father. Thanks for sharing.

Posted on 05/06/2008 at 6:05:19 PM

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