Come Dance with Me

By Coffee Mugg, published Apr 06, 2008
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My love,
What a dream you are to me.

We walk hand in hand,
Sometimes by the sea,
And yes it seems a dream.
But a dream how can it be?
With you I feel so free.

The crashing of the waves,
Erasing old footsteps,
To create new beginnings,
A new life, you and me.

I walk with you tonight,
As we always do,
Showing our love,
How great to be with you.
My heart fills with joy,
With every thought of you.

Tiki torches in the distance,
Their flames dance to the breeze,
As if they are beckoning,
Come dance with me.

Dance we will,
But first a kiss,
As the water sweeps across our feet.

With you I am ready to begin,
Where are you, but in my pen?

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you are a wonderful loving person, (((((((((((((((KEN))))))))))))))) ARTME

Posted on 04/09/2008 at 5:04:34 PM

 
Ken every day i look for your words. They wash over me, flow through me and transport me to another place. What magic you have if only you knew it. I love this poem

Posted on 04/08/2008 at 7:04:22 AM

 
Super great...plus.

Posted on 04/07/2008 at 8:04:02 PM

 
Ooooh la la, I like it alot, very romantic, and my vision is always on the beach so I totally feel you. Great work

Posted on 04/07/2008 at 12:04:14 PM

 
If you dare to pen, you may dance again! Lovely work, dear Mr. Ken. ;-)

Posted on 04/07/2008 at 8:04:50 AM

 
This is wonderful, Poet Master Ken! As always, you sure can dazzle me with your art! ***************************************************************************************************************

Posted on 04/07/2008 at 6:04:57 AM

 
Beautifully put once again Ken. Amazing poem that touches me like always. I can relate that true love remains in my pen! Plus it gives me good personal advice and doesn't turn into a fight, instead a learning experience. I truly loved the tiki lights and waves at the feet. What really caught my attention as well was the waves wash away the footprints, making a new memory. Beautiful story and poem. Very inspirational this morning. I am at awe in words for what you wrote this day!

Posted on 04/07/2008 at 6:04:29 AM

 
Very beautiful and so romantic, your day will come when your angel will enter your life when you least expect it, you deserve well, lovely job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted on 04/07/2008 at 5:04:03 AM

 
Excellent poem Mr. Coffee, an addendum to "From Here To Eternity" in the romance department. That pen of yours is priceless when you think about how many people only wish they could write like that. And then there's this thing about "your not alone" when you combine all the people like me that are in the same boat as you with all the couples that just pretend to be happy and really hate the relationships that they're in it's about half the population. No your not alone at all. Most of all- you will find the RIGHT ONE soon enough. God bless. *****

Posted on 04/07/2008 at 12:04:07 AM

 
Ken, one day that very special woman will be there with you...God already has her picked out for you, and when the time is right he will send her to you.... We don't always understand why life happens differently than the way we want it to, but there is a bigger picture and we often can't see but a small part of it. God has plans for you... He has given you an amazing talent and you use it well.....Thank you for sharing your Heart-words with us..~ PEACE ~ Nancie

Posted on 04/06/2008 at 9:04:57 PM

 
Excellent love poem I wish I could be like you----all I think about lately are things that bother me---maybe this reading will chnge my attitude.

Posted on 04/06/2008 at 9:04:45 PM

 
Wonderful poem Ken. I'm sure she won't always be only in your pen.

Posted on 04/06/2008 at 9:04:05 PM

 
Beautiful and very romantic...nice job, Mr. Ken.

Posted on 04/06/2008 at 8:04:15 PM

 
I see you are a romantic poet............another nice poem delivered!

Posted on 04/06/2008 at 8:04:32 PM

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