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Falling Of...............Falling In

A Poem for Love and Sorrow

By SAIKAT KUMAR DUTTA, published Apr 07, 2008
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Falling of leaves,
From the slowly beating heart of a mother tree,
Have you ever asked her ?
Whether she is lamenting or trying to tell something thee.

Falling of tears,
From the never tired eyes of a pure soul,
Have you ever realized them ?
if they are originated from a volcano or from a cool earth pole.

Falling of patience,
From the highest peak of one's mind mountain,
Have you ever examined it ?
How long you can store that or how will you it re-obtain.

Falling of confidence,
From the reliable source of a honest personal point,
Have you ever touched that problem ?
If you break your mirror of faith, it's broken parts can't be joined.

Falling in Love,
From an unknown chamber of your sensible heart,
Have you ever felt it ?
Whether it always demands or sometimes acts as your life guard.

Falling of rain drops,
From the all corners of an invisible broken heart sky,
Did you see all and my sister Lisa ?
Feeling our sorrow on the earth, sometimes gods of heaven, they also cry.

Falling Of...............Falling In

Have you felt them ?

Credit: Saikat Kumar Dutta

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Beautiful poem. You express poetry nicely.

Posted on 07/28/2008 at 9:07:20 AM

 
Brief, but well done.

Posted on 04/27/2008 at 4:04:15 PM

 
So beautiful. Thank you.

Posted on 04/22/2008 at 3:04:00 AM

 
Very good. Thanks for sharing.

Posted on 04/21/2008 at 6:04:37 PM

 
Your poems always inspire deep thinking. Great job.

Posted on 04/21/2008 at 1:04:14 AM

 
Nice job!

Posted on 04/20/2008 at 11:04:07 AM

 
beautiful, thank you

Posted on 04/19/2008 at 9:04:59 AM

 
Okay, you convinced me. You make it sound as wonderful as it is :) Sheri

Posted on 04/19/2008 at 2:04:28 AM

 
Nice poetry !!

Posted on 04/18/2008 at 6:04:57 AM

 
A poem packed with thoughts that go in-depth to tell who you are. Beautiful to narrate and experience the power of words. Keep it up !

Posted on 04/17/2008 at 11:04:15 PM

 
Lovely poem,well written and great sentiments.Thank you for sharing

Posted on 04/16/2008 at 9:04:14 AM

 
beautiful!

Posted on 04/14/2008 at 6:04:53 PM

 
Saikat, this is such a beautiful poem....Lisa will be so pleased when she reads it..... You are a good friend...Thank you for sharing it with us all Good Job!+*+*+* ~ PEACE for Lisa ~

Posted on 04/14/2008 at 3:04:25 PM

 
Interesting combination of words. The usage of falling of and falling in made it connected and a good read.

Posted on 04/14/2008 at 10:04:25 AM

 
very good!

Posted on 04/13/2008 at 6:04:41 PM

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